"Gentlemen" is plural, so "gentlemens'" is the correct plural possessive.
"Who ever" is probably wrong: as-is, it means the sexiest Democrats inside heard of a a nice piece of elephant. They almost certainly mean: "The sexiest Democrats inside--whoever heard of a nice piece of elephant?"
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COMMENTS (11)
"Gentlemen's", not "Gentlemens'". Also, the accent on the e of "Boheme" is pointing the wrong way.
Posted by: bgn | August 25, 2008 3:53 PM
Colorado's not exactly known for it's (sic) quality education system.
Posted by: Trevor J | August 25, 2008 3:54 PM
I believe it's the second "e" in "Sexiest."
Posted by: N Dawgg | August 25, 2008 4:22 PM
Good news, Dawgg: Sexism is dead. The bitches killed that witch themselves.
Posted by: Anonymous | August 25, 2008 4:47 PM
"Who ever"...
Apostrophe in wrong place on "gentlemen's"...
Posted by: Traven | August 25, 2008 4:50 PM
The street number is actually 1435?
Posted by: cminus | August 25, 2008 5:14 PM
-Gentlemens'- is OK; it's a cabaret intended for multiple gentlemen, not just one, so the plural possessive is fine.
"Who ever" is wrong, I guess...and no question mark...
Oh, and it does read like a horrible run-on sentence, like the sexy democrats inside were sexy democrats who had heard of a nice piece of elephant
Posted by: grammar is 4 suckas | August 25, 2008 5:15 PM
"Gentlemen" is plural, so "gentlemens'" is the correct plural possessive.
"Who ever" is probably wrong: as-is, it means the sexiest Democrats inside heard of a a nice piece of elephant. They almost certainly mean: "The sexiest Democrats inside--whoever heard of a nice piece of elephant?"
Posted by: croatoan | August 25, 2008 5:34 PM
Sorry, "gentlemen's" is correct.
Posted by: croatoan | August 25, 2008 5:35 PM
I don't think Dana posted this to debate an apostrophe. N Dawgg gets the prize.
Posted by: Eric | August 25, 2008 8:44 PM
I think that Strunk and White agree with croatan.
Posted by: ny spotlight | August 25, 2008 11:39 PM